Carbs cleaned, rebuilt with new gaskets etc and reassembled -
Here's the choke linkage -
I found this time that the choke butterflies weren't actuating when I tested the choke assembly. Turns out it's very easy to skew the alignment of the two choke "stems" going through the carbs, and also the butterflies themselves can bind against the inside of the carb bodies. When I bolted on the two long brackets that hold the bank together, this threw the alignment out of whack and the choke assembly seized up. I found that by loosely bolting on the rear bracket first (and continually checking that the choke operated) and then the front one, I could then tighten everything up while also keeping the alignment good and the choke working as advertised.
The float bowls and carb hats (whatever they're called) will get a decent polish later on, but for now this job's a good'un.