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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

i hear ya. cleans it up a bit. :)
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

and if your not a color fan:
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

Looks good man, only thing I would suggest is to adjust the kerning of the "T" and the "." in "BUILT".

Also, maybe try adjusting the tracking of "NOT BOUGHT" so that it matches the edges of "BUILT".
 
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the public speaks, i listen. ;)
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

and the adjusted V1
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

One thought, I know this maybe picky, but I think it'll make a difference. The rounded corners on the poster font is clashing with the Cafe Racers font because it has rounded off corners, but the logo font doesn't. If you could find a font that has hard edges like the logo font, you'll be golden.
 
Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

Those small adjustments are really looking good, great job on tweaking it!
 
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yeah.. it didn't flow as nicely with Side Cars... but there it is with a different font. Not sure if I love the new font, but I'll let the public judge. :)
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

I was only kidding about the side cars, haha.

Try this font out http://www.losttype.com/font/?name=governor
 
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Looks much better! Forgive me for being picky, and feel free to tell me when you think I'm bananas, but how about ditching the periods behind "Built" and "Not Bough"?
 
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no problem man. The hardest part about designing stuff is listening to feedback, but it's what creates better designed things. I constantly design things and tear them apart to start over seconds later.
 
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I take it a "hack" is a Sidecar rig?
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

BCBarker said:
no problem man. The hardest part about designing stuff is listening to feedback, but it's what creates better designed things. I constantly design things and tear them apart to start over seconds later.

It's looking better and better!!

Well, I hope this doesn't rub you the wrong way, but what about off-setting the "Built" and the "Not Bought" at the same juxtaposition as you have the categories underneath them? Also, I think it would look a little more refined if the black box outline detail ran behind the Cafe Racer Dude image.

Thanks for your patience... I do this stuff for a living, so it's hard not to scrutinize.
 
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The thin black line is the document size outline. The area beyond is the bleed for the printer.

I do it too, so I totally understand the feedback! Usually it's from someone who does't know a thing about design other that "we don't like it" or "We like it, but it's not right"
 

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Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

I gotcha! I love it dude. I've got a lot of wall space in my garage that could use that beauty. :)
 
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I am the stated person who knows virtually nothing about graphic design; although, I can say I have some room squared away for it to be displayed. I like it.
 
Re: DTT / Cafe Racer / Vintage Moto Shop Banners

awesome!

I'm working up one of two more designs before we do to print. There will be a choice between the different ones and sizes. Thinking the order would go in around Nov 1st and mail them out Nov 7th.

Stay tuned!!
 
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